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Post by Pareadise on May 9, 2004 12:39:04 GMT -5
ur so kind to me; lovin me iz ur only game Para iz ur name n it will neva ware out until i drop out but i wont i say iam not werth u but u say iam compared to u iam jus a lil dot but u make me feel more than that n i luv ya more fer dat we fereva one we have lotsa fun togetha wetha together or not i still have love for u to let u go id have to be a foo lov ya fereva Para
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BigJu
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Post by BigJu on May 12, 2004 7:50:44 GMT -5
nice man i would work on it a bit but it a good start!!! u got alot in there man
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Post by J$crILLa on May 12, 2004 17:45:44 GMT -5
it was a nice lil poem pirece
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Post by Pareadise on May 13, 2004 19:03:54 GMT -5
thx guyz ill keep tryin and mkin em longer thx fer the advice
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Post by Nicki on May 14, 2004 5:06:16 GMT -5
nice work nice style youve got i wouldnt change it personally keep um coming x
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