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Post by Nicki on May 5, 2004 5:10:41 GMT -5
Deception, an illusion is all that my life is Nothing really special for me to revel in In my little corner of the room I sit quietly For this is where I've been thrown, no one listens to me
Can you hear me out there? Am I speaking too soft? Are you even there Looking down from above?
Why do I even bother to let you know how I feel You've never listened to me and you ignore me still I've bled beyond death and cried beyond dry I've shed all that I had to entertain your delights
Your constant abuse, bemuse and neglect Has left my mind in a ditch and my will torn to shreds The scars that decorate me are nothing more than your artwork A victim of times when you struck at me berserk
Are you listening to me? Are my words being heard? Or do you dismiss me again For what I say is absurd?
Why do I bother to tell you of my distress You've ignored me before and this just happens again I've bled beyond death and I've cried all my rain But you'll just change the channel from this show of my pain
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Post by Young Tru on May 5, 2004 5:21:49 GMT -5
One word only...DEEP.. great work, keep it up peace
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Post by Johnny H on May 5, 2004 9:47:25 GMT -5
i like it alot always wit the good poetry!
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Post by TIdubble on May 5, 2004 19:11:00 GMT -5
One word only...DEEP.. great work, keep it up peace totally... nicki you rock!!
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Post by J$crILLa on May 5, 2004 20:44:47 GMT -5
Nicki u always holdin it down like muthafucka when it come to this poetry shit
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Post by B~nice on May 6, 2004 20:16:22 GMT -5
true dat
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Post by BigJu on May 12, 2004 7:58:26 GMT -5
that was some good shit keep them up
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Post by Nicki on May 14, 2004 5:10:31 GMT -5
Thanks ya'll much love xx
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